Lured

Here is a little hook for my upcoming story. My editor and I have finally finished it and are getting ready to put it up online.
let me know what you think.

A short story of approximately 2270 words, or 7 pages, long.

Do you wonder what the thing you see out of the corner of your eye is since nothing is visible when you turn to look at it? Ever been afraid of the noises you hear in dark, empty rooms? Have you ever wanted to see what the shadows do when they seem to take on a life of their own? Maybe you shouldn’t be scared of the dark but of the shadows that lie within.